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Perfect Beach Day.. almost (perfect moment ruined challenge)

The mood was right ,calm and relaxing. Eric and Tanya were on the beach enjoying a fabulous summer day. They had been in the water, swimming and making out. They are in love! The two of them chose to escape their hectic life in LA. For a weekend. They were indulging in all the bliss that Maui has to offer.

The weather was ideal. The sun was shining bright and it made the ocean look amazing. Sand on the beach was warm and soothing to the touch. Postcards could be generated with the aesthetic splendors that were all around them.

Eric took Tanya in his strong loving arms and he showered her with his love. They made out on the beach. Thankfully there were not a lot of spectators to observe their display of public affection.

They thought to themselves, this day is so perfect, nothing could go wrong. They were wrong, Above the east Maui mountains, is a huge, dark, threatening cloud. “This doesn’t look good”. Eric observed. Within seconds rain came crashing down. Ruining their perfect day.

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