awwwwwwww im sorry

its okay I no your here for me lol

I know this is a solemn poem and everything but this line just made me laugh:

“I lent you my trust
My heart you did bust”

But in all seriousness, it was a deep poem and I felt like you did a great job.
:-) =^..=
-Emmyful

There will be others. You have tons of time to find other guys. I know it doesn’t seem like it now, but keep your head up and look ahead. =)
LoA

thanks everyone, lol ya Emmyful, I agree. It made me laugh as I was typing it. Nothing else fit, lol.

There will be others. You have tons of time to find other guys. I know it doesn’t seem like it now, but keep your head up and look ahead. =)
LoA

I liked the poem, but there is a grammatical error: it should be “you’re” not “your”.

Great poem and yet something else that is quite relateable. Wonderful job!