It’s funny but this is actually my favorite so far in the series. I love the first paragraph and how it ends up that he was just in the drivethru. Great tease there.

Awesome work on this series, which is no small feat as it was written backwards. Very believable characters and dialogue.

Please allow me to ditto both Ana and Between here ;)

yes me too. wow john, thiss is getting amazing!
LoA

man it is easy to get sucked into this

ya.. this is awesome!! great stuff John!!

Ha, this is my favorite of this series so far. The tense first paragraph, being in a drive-thru. I always enjoy your writing, John, but you’re hitting above the bar, today!