wow
this is really good.
probably one of the best ficlets i’ve read so far
really good job.
:)
5 star ++

omg.. this story is emotionally packed. i could almost see you pounding your fist into a wall. Or the person in the story rather. Excellent descriptions. ha ha im number 14.. thats cool. Thank you!

I like the raw emotion of the story. Very well done. I like how you incorporated the music in there as well. Those walls can be real assholes sometimes, you know.

Very tense. The imagery is strong and the inner thoughts of the character help the reader figure out your narrator’s need for violence.

I completely agree with everyone, this is a great ficlet with some of the greastest imagery I’ve ever seen and some of the rawest feelings. Awesome job!

aww thanks guys =)
it really makes my day to see such positive comments on my writing