This is the end/beginning. I had a good time writing this, and I hope at least one or two people enjoyed reading it. Some of this may not fit perfectly because I ended up writing it backwards, and had no idea what the story was when I started. Kind of an odd way to write, but really fun and different. One note. The guy who picks up George in the first/last one of these is supposed to be Tony from the previous two ficlets. If there is interest, I may write an epilogue as I like both of those characters.
After all of that great fun, it’s about a cookie recipe to end all cookie recipes? That makes it even better. I loved the line: “I was unaware there was a face of mall bakeries to change.”
Go for the epilogue. They must have been fun characters to write. This was insane, what with the notorious cookie recipe, but really, really well written. Awesome work.
i agree totally with Ana. Go for an epiloguge! and I have one question.. isn’t Tony working for Sloan?? if so.. why did George go with him? ~ but still nice work John! I wasn’t expecting them to all be after a cookie recipe! LoA
Ha…hahaha…hahahaha… That’s just funny stuff. Although the gritty, crime-oriented side of my fiction-analytic mind thinks that maybe these cookie and confection companies aren’t what they appear to be. And, oddly, Bill Shatner and Tim Curry’s characters in the Loaded Gun movie comes to mind.
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