Intriguing last line I’m trying to wrap myself around at the moment.

Ok, so now the whole family sees them? Is there something special with the family, or are the magpies increasing in number in preparation for world domination? Interesting.
Very well written as always.

Nice, I really like the way you revealed that the whole family can “see”.

Weeelll…… I hadn’t thought about the whole family “seeing” until my partner in creepy crime tossed in that dad could see. So.. since the Rev. introduced the couple it only made sense there was a reason behind the introduction (advancement of the ‘species’ and what not.) But, lil sis is just going through her teasing rant, maybe she can “see” and then again maybe she can’t. ;D

You have a way of writing goosebump-inducing last sentences. Great series you both have going here. I hope you continue it.