What would happen and what will are two different things.. I smell a very cool series Stovo, brilliant as usual, great dialogue and plotting. look forward to more of Griggs

When it first started I thought about your human slavery ficlet, but you took this in a completely different direction.
Very tense read, and brilliant as always. Plus, the name “Griggs” is awesome.

Very tense, right there in the action but with a few little glimpses into this guy’s character.

That was intense. Griggs really seems like a no-nonsense kind of guy. He’s probably rushing the building right now.

Yip – i agree with all the above.. i think this will be a great series that i’ll just have to keep my eye on.

Awesome start.

I don’t know – I might sequel this or not. It’s time for people to climb out of their shells and start sequeling my stuff like they used to! I wanna see your stuff, guys!
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John Perkins – And yes. I was thinking about writing a whole something-or-other around the names Papa Griggs and Uncle Dusty. Poetry.

@Stovo, I just sequeled your Human For Sale ficlet like a month ago. Dang you’re needy.

Ask and you shall receive. It’s not great, but I didn’t really have an idea of what to do.

Stovohobo, you always create the most interesting characters. Not to mention names. I love “Griggs.” It matches him, somehow.

I really enjoyed this one, Stovo. So much that I have tacked my own sequel on at the end of John’s.
Hope that I didn’t spoil your plans for Griggs :-D
LoA

griggs. hah.