Owowowoo…that last line really made me mentally rub my hands together in a ficlety, seriesy kinda way. Awesome. And I like how you may have referenced back to “that night.”

Wow, that last line takes the story to a whole new arena of psychological intrigue. I love it!

Ya.. i love the ending.. very moody in an evil, innocently-sinister sorta way!
Very cool sequel.

Agree with all. The ending really made this. Good sequel.
I think you may have misspelled “trembled” in the third to last paragraph.

freaking awesome ending great work

Very creepy. Nicely done.

Nicely done! I wasn’t planning on a supernatural or haunting direction for this story, but I love where you took it. I’d even be very interested in seeing where you take this thread, if you want to continue it.
This was really, really chilling.

Nice way to crank up the internal conflict.

Very cool, Krulltar. Gave me goose-bumps!