The end is made all the more horrifying by the clever, misleading set-up. You truly believe Jim is in love with his woman. That last sentence is killer, by the way (pun not intended – well, OK, maybe it should be).
It inspired a reverse perspective out of me.I loved this..Consider this sequeled
Great twist. And I love twists. Very well done.
Wow, that was quite awesome! I didn’t see it coming at all.
i didnt see it coming, but it was sad :\
Holy stromboli, I never would have guessed that. Incredible.
What a twisted guy. You do believe he loves her, and then WHAM ! he kills her. Awesome.
What a twisted guy.
You do believe he loves her, and then WHAM ! he kills her.
Awesome.
OMG ! HaHa! This was well orginized with a great twist! Very good job!
LOL .Loved it. High five Jim for me, will ya?
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