For all you Twilight fans out there, there is a contest to write the Epilogue to BD from another character’s perspective. I’m trying it out here first, before I enter.
To learn more, go here:
http://twilightseriestheories.com/tst-contest

That was great! I totally love it! Thanks for reminding me how absolutely wonderful Edward is! (can’t wait for Midnight Sun! and BD and the movie!!!!)

i think im going to start this er twilight series. my entire school is reading and talking about so i might as well see whats so special about it. from what you wrote, which was awesome, the book sounds chill.

Yes yes yes yes yes!

Okay, I’m not familiar with Twilight, so what you do here will have a major role in deciding whether or not I investigate it further. (Not to put any pressure on you or anything).

Great start. I loved the last line.

Bella got changed into a vampire?

Since when?

I’m not a big fan of the series (Only read the first one, and it probably shows) but this was pretty good.

You should write a book, Ana!

ome this is amazing…this would make the perfect epilogue. =))

OMG this is so great! Great job! I agree with the above: it would make an amazing epilogue.

I liked the painful transition to vampire described here and the little hints at how the relationship dynamics would be changing.

Fan fiction! Yay! (That was sarcasm, if you must know, but you’re forgiven since it’s much better than the fourteen-year-olds who post on DeviantART).
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No, really, I liked this ficlet. I’ve never read the books, and I assume this is sort of a spoiler anyway. Great descriptions and such.

very gripping and intense….very good character-to-character relationship….

beautifully written.. don’t know much about vampires and things of that sort. The descriptions you wrote with were absolutely beautiful.. This story has a haunting quality to it.. just by the way you wrote and illustrated the story.. very cool photo to match.. Bravo!!

that was so good where did you learn to right like that keep going you can do more

ahh!!!
i went to the Breaking Dawn release last night!!!!
it was so incredibly fun.
i don’t get my book for another week or so, but still.
i feel like such a nerd but i love the Twilight series.!!!
i can’t wait for the movie to come out so i can see how well they portrayed the books.

but….
you definetly did a good job with this one.
kudos.

Ooooh, I love this, I went to the release, but didn’t have money to buy it, but I do love the series. This would be an excellent epilogue to Breaking Dawn. [[Apparently, my friends are major spoilers that gasp at everything]]

Wow, you write beautiful prose. It captivated my attention right away.