A solid sequel. Great dialogue, further developing the characters and showing their frustration at the quickly unraveling situation.
Very tense, driving steadily towards disaster little story. Nicely done.
Great sequel to Stovo’s story, keeping the personalities of characters well, which is hard to do, in my opinion. Congratulations on the eye-grabbing title.
Well done, I enjoyed this as much as the previous one by Stovo.
I liked the milieu so much that I have added a sequel. LoA
I liked the milieu so much that I have added a sequel.
LoA
When I read the title, I immediately pictured Sean Connery in my head. Come to think of it, Sean Connery and Griggs are alike…
When I read the title, I immediately pictured Sean Connery in my head.
Come to think of it, Sean Connery and Griggs are alike…
Ha, Sean Connery. The dialogue was great, and I was, of course, thrilled that I had a sequel. And the title was great. =)
hahaha, sean connery. niiiice.and i do love the title. :)
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