Nice switch at the end, very tight story , i am always amazed when people can work a complete narrative in the ficlet form.

I love the reversal of narratives. Thanks a lot!

Ha ha. Great sequel. I love the detail about him losing his job as his reasoning for going for the insurance money.

I love that she had the same idea he did. He just got ‘r done first. Fun sequel.

tight i dig it

Another great one!

It’s really cool how you took it from her perspective, and the last line is great!

Awesome, again!

Whoa! I really like it! Sequal!
LoA