Being a musician myself, I connect to the protagonist in this ficlet. The butterflies before your first song is the reason, we singers, play music. Conquering the fear is half the thrill.
I have one lil critique however. In this sentence: I knew that I was good, but I couldn’t sing in front of my school friends, can I?
you switch from past-tense to present tense. I suggest using ”..could I?” instead of ”..can I?” But other than that – it reads nicely.
I have to agree with Alro. For us performers half of the fun and joy you get is conquering the jitters that hit you just as you are about to perform. I also agree that that part might sound better as “could I?”. Besides that its a great first Ficlet! Great job!
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