This does not suck AND it adds another person into the story. You did a good job, you should be pleased :)

Thank ya kindly!

:)

Ahhh this is turning into something amazing!

so.. is our main a guy or a girl?? hmm

Hooray!
Band baby- it’s all up to whomever continues it.

hmm… I wonder too!
LoA

Wow. This is pretty powerful, for so few words.