The pain. The desire. The reason not to. And yet the inability to resist. Very well drawn out scene. Heartbreaking, really.

Conveys the feeling of dependency very well.

wow. I like this alot! You can feel the pain!
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Just one the most vividly told stories Ive coe across..full of pain and longing.. really well done..

Amazing.

I feel for this person, and it’s hard to make people do that in a short ficlet.

Well done. You brought out the tragedies of addiction very well. And I loved the little flashback of the aquarium.

You’ve got an unsolicited sequel. Hope you don’t hate it.

this is really good. very descriptive!

This story reaches right out an sucks you into a very dark scary place. Good job!

Wow. So many comments. Thanks everybody.