Wow. Thats deep. You did a great job of showing a person just giving up. Its sad and yet oddly freeing.

Very raw and full of emotion, sad. An eerily described scene. Well done.

Beautifully written, and that’s one incredible picture. Great job.

Very deep. The picture really fits! I loved it!
LoA

I love this, especially the middle paragraph and the repetition of ‘I don’t care’.

Very convincing. I like this a lot.