I like the ‘discussion’ over whose name to use at the end. I feel like we’re in for something disastrous down the road. Looking forward to seeing your further spin on the challenge.

I agree, the part where Alina tells her to use her name is great. Sets up some future intrigue. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

Makes me think of Cyrano, which doesn’t help the sense of impending disaster.

Agreed with all those above.

Me thinks Alina is trying to use the situation to her advantage.

Agreed with everyone. It’s a good way to let readers think something very murky is just down the road

Ok, so this was wonderful BARomero.. but for the challenge do we sequel this? or start our own.. a little confused here..

I don’t particularly mind if someone decides to sequel me here.

@band baby: You’re free to start from “Fairy tale challenge – Two sisters (introduction and “start from here”)” or from BARometro’s work, as you wish.

Same thing applies to every other entry, if the singular author is willing like BARometro was