I love the last line. Something about the dark figures dropping just felt aesthetically proper.

Nice use of the prequel to really set up the impending action. And a great job of describing the planes.
Well done.

Fantastic job describing the planes. I could really picture them in my mind.

That’s really cool Stovo. My first thought about the raveners was also some sort of ultra elite black ops team or something, so we are definintely on the same page here.

I have sequelled a view from the other camp :-D

I sequelled a view from the other side :-D

That title made me chuckle!

Good job on the description, as mentioned above.