..like an engorged centipede that’s been tortured by a selfish five-year-old.

LOVE that line!
awesome ficlet.

I agree! That line was amazing!
This was an entertaining read :)

Hmm.. how to put this simply…
I choose: D) All of the above

Now that’s an awesome way to kill a guard. Definitely agree with the others, it’s truly awesome.

Some great lines in there, and a nice job making us relate with in subtle ways this careful and quiet killer.