Wow, either this go is overly dramatic or this hostage situation is even bigger than I imagined it to be. Great sequel!
Well, they have the whole university under hostage, don’t they? And whoever sequels must finally explain what the raveners are! Or else. Great job in conveying the mood of triumph and accomplishment of their goal, from the view of a terrorist!
Well, they have the whole university under hostage, don’t they?
And whoever sequels must finally explain what the raveners are!
Or else.
Great job in conveying the mood of triumph and accomplishment of their goal, from the view of a terrorist!
Well this just jumped into a whole new level conflict. Great job on bringing in the “bad guy’s” point of view, and giving them some larger purpose.
I like the change of pace, switching to the enemy. And Johnny Razor and the Edge Team – that sounds like a Saturday morning 80s cartoon. Which automatically renders it awesome.
Very dark, but a good job on the dramatic telling, unflinchingly in the perspective of the bad guys.
Nice to see the other side. :)
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