Ooh, I’m very intrigued. this sort of reminds me of the scene in “Bruce Almighty” when he first meets God in an empty building. Heh, if that’s the case her, this sounds like my kind of God. But in all seriousness, I’m interested to see where this goes. Especially with a warning like the one given previously!
haha sweet. but two mistakes.. ((sorry!)) the first paragraph it should be ‘that’ instead of ‘the’ and I believe his name should be ‘scott’ but I could be mistaken. It wouldn’t be the first time. ` overall nice job!!
“What open house?” He asked. I love that this guy doesn’t quite pickup on the fact that the open house is happening. It would be really cool if it wasn’t his open house and he showed them around anyway.
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