oooh. good continuation!
I like how it’s all one sentence. Sorta gives me an image of him clenching his teeth with determination… Now we only wait to see if he did find them… Good job!
I like how it’s all one sentence.
Sorta gives me an image of him clenching his teeth with determination…
Now we only wait to see if he did find them…
Good job!
I like the determination
i agree with the above!
he must find it to save her!LoA
or maybe he needs to find it to get revenge i love revenge loa lol
thanks guys i appreciate the comments
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