Go May! I love baking contests. : ) Great way to incorporate the sayings into the ficlet.

Cool. I love pie! What kind of pie was it? Lol!
LoA

May Bell!
And a dead rat smell makes it in, too! I love the plastered on smile and the way the judge says, “Smells like a winner, that one there.” It’s hard to tell if he means May’s pie or the smelly one next to hers! (Just like overhearing a conversation in passing.)

Yay May! Nice job =]

That was awesome.

And putting in the dead rat smells was genius!

Only noticed one misspelling: to e talking was probably meant to be to be talking.

otherwise, it was great!

“pie with not too much rat in it please” Monty Python
Loved the story

loved this too!!
I’d love some Rat-Creamed Pie myself! :)