haha. very nice way of incorperating the phrase!!
LoA

I like the portrayal of stage fright, the judge’s demeanor (very patronizing), and even incorporating a real smell at the end!

Ah yes.

Auditions.

Been there, done that, and the stress took out a couple years of my life!

You really portrayed the stage fright and nerves very well!

I love this.. awesome work . . i so relate to this!!!