nice… i think you should make a sequel and put some more action in the next one. this one doesnt have a lot going on but its good so far. :D

Sure it does! It is the beginning! gahh… new people on here have no idea…. lol. Great start!
LoA

Aw, I wonder what happened to her!

Sequeled! I do hope it’s the correct one. : ) Great intro.