Aw, how cute. At first I was thinking what is this?! But I get it now. Tell your four year old I liked his (I’m guessing from cars, dinosaurs and monster trucks) story very much.
Your four year old used to many “the”s in the last sentence. but since he is new to ficlets, don’t scold him to hard. :P I loved the simplicity of the story.
True, he used to many “the’s” but he doesn’t know how to spell, so he thinks that both pronounciations of “the” are different words. so to him it reads “ThA, Thee End” It’s kinda cute, and try as I might to explain to him that they are the same word, he doesn’t believe me becuase he can pronounce them differently. I wasn’t sure how to write what he said, thus the two the’s.
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