Once again, pens, you manage to blow me away with your writing. I love the feel of this, especially the second paragraph. Perfectly depicted summer moments and thoughts, every phrase precise and meaningful. Absolutely beautiful work. Bravo!

This is simply amazing. Not sure how else to describe it.
“And speak the way the ocean would sound if it could sing.” I can not express how awesome that is.

off-beat heart…off beat…arrhythmatic? erratic heart beat? Just thought the last line read funny, but I loved the sense of dread as summer draws to a close, and maybe losing time with a special someone. :)

Thank you for the compliments! And Elsha, I thought the last line read funny too. I meant it as off-beat, as in ecclectic, different, ect. But you’re right, it does sort of sound a little silly. :]