aaawwwwww, it’s so sad. It makes me want to cry. Especially the part where the note says you’re not coming back because you love me. That part is my favorite.

This is really sad, but probably a reality in some homes, which makes it even sadder. Nice work.

dood i loved this story- your a great writer

Great. I liked how at first, I thought he/her had made this decision on his/her own, but find out that the mum told him/her to.

Laine Grey-
_{My dearest son}

it’s okay i forgive you, lol.

i rlly like it its very sad and is true in some homes you should become a writer

=( sad stuff!

That was really good. Your a good writer.

That was so sadd. I hate that it is a reality in the lives of some people. Your a veryy good witer. ..Props. haha.

So sad. But so… much of reality. That happened to my friend. But he’s with his grandfather now.

Thats so sad.