Very exciting. Made me think of some of the Image comics from back in the day. Exciting stuff.

Well done, Stovo. In addition to keeping the suspense going nicely, and sketching the loss of a team member very well, you had me headed off to Wikipedia to find out who on earth Katy Perry is!

And I really like the animal names, nice touch

Very well written. You one of the best on suspense. And the Katy Perry title was a nice touch.

Haha, nice title indeed. I like the names, too. Nice job.
LoA

I love the title and the names. Very suspenseful. Great job.
LoA

Disclaimer (before any attacks come): I don’t for a fact know if she is lesbian or not. It’s just a pop culture reference. We’re all buddies, right? =D

Awesome. Great tone, pace and suspense here. Quite fantastic all around.
And I too had to look up Katy Perry. Apparently she’s that chick who ripped off Jill Sobule.

As well as a thought title as I have ever seen. Gripping action.

Nice sequence, can’t wait to see what happens next.

OK Stovo, I have added a sequel. I can’t seem to be as imaginative as you on titles, but I promise to try as hard as I can :-D

Greatly written and highly suspenseful.

“The campus is in sight,â€? he said, through a series of complicated hand gestures.

Made me laugh.

Very cool sequel.

you are darn lucky i didn’t find this before you commented that disclaimer.
i saw the title and immediatly thought: “i will verbally bite his head off.”
or, really, things along that line.
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the story was good, none the less. i’m not following with the whole series, but this was a good piece in itself.
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