o wow, thats good, very dramatic, i think you should go on!!

o wow, thats good, very dramatic, i think you should go on!!

This is really good, very dramatic!

That’s cool.

I loved how someone finally acknowledged the fact that running around like a crazy person is useless!

oh wow! I love it Freedom!
LoA

Someone can sequel it if they want. Thanks for the comments. It was just a random story. There will be a lot more coming. I had to get my mind off series for a bit.

I just sequeled!

Hope it’s good enough.

Wow this was really good and mysterious. I actually got a chill down my spine as I read this, lol. Great job!

Chilling…

intersting!

i would have to get a beer for the road

LOL ! This was more like the beginning than the end [= I still love reading this!