Whoa, this is an amazing sequel. You can feel the intensity of this scene. A father with his daughter. Just great, great job.

Very good! I like this…I am going to sequel. Maybe we can get something going…

Another great take on ficlet #1. I really like it.

Yea, we could make this a chain!
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Really powerful. 2 thumbs up.

Glad everyone liked it.

Now I have to go and read the next sequel!

good sequel! So this has turned into a series?
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Aww, poor little girl…

Aww I almost got teary eyed! Amazing job!

i would say baby here take this shot of hennessy it will be like an end of the world anesthetic 4.98 stars