wow, this is really good! i like it alot, and it all makes sense about why you asked my eye color =P

Nice mix of the mundane and the fantastic/mysterious. Solid, thoughtful descriptions of everyday sorts of things.

So cute! I love this!
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fantastically adorable!
i like that word you used; intrensic.
i’ve never heard it before hahaha.
=]

aww this is amazing! i don’t even know what else to say!

awwww, maybe its her….
love this

I agree with THX . I like the fantasy edge mixed with the ordinary. Fantastic!
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I love the first paragraph! It’s so descriptive. This series is great!