oh damn. i’m sorry.. this was really good but.. well.. really kinda sacry too ya know?

let someone help. let anyone help. your gf ur friends even people like me that u really barely know but they all want to help you so let them into your heart

snap out of it! Life is hard, teenagers are mean, it’s a cruel world, but we just find something nice and hang on to that. Ride the waves and get to shore.

awkward adverbs, too many -ly’s And ‘goodly?’ please.

sorry, I meant ‘coldly’

makes me wonder whats happening to the character…
why is somebody torturing him?
is he alright?
=]

I think he’ll be just fine… =)