Very painful, very bleak, and yet the haiku flow is great and adds some beauty. :)
Wow – that’s a sad one!But awesome.
I can see your feeling some pain in this one. But I love it and I can relate…somewhat. lol, great job!LoA
Great last line, and inventive use of the haiku format.
You have sequel, sweet-cheeks.
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