Yay! Ha, yes, they wouldn’t be separated too long! Very enjoyable string of sequels that you’ve made. Definitely looking forward to the action to come. : )
Ooh, nice twist and certainly sets up a lot of potentials and later drama, which could go beautifully or horribly. I’m not %100 on some of the dialog; might be worth really trying to picture how you and a friend would talk.
Both star-struck lovers, heading to the “town so nice they named it twice”? Coincidence? considers pensively Heck no! There’s no such thing a coincidence! Divine intervention’s more like it!
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