Ok, maybe it’s not that good. Since ficlets started working I have a wave of inspiration to write and I just wanted to get this in.LoA
“Choosing if I ever care where it leads” is awkward, and the ending comes too quickly :( ! I think you can edit and expand this, maybe with a good metaphor. But I know how you feel about writing!!
thanks for the tip! =D
I hope that’s better!
much better tho i didn’t read the original… lol =)LoA
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