That was sweet. Intended as a poem, free verse sort of thing?

um, i really dont know, kinda just, wrote it, umm, i suppose, and thanks for the comment

um, i really dont know, kinda just, wrote it, umm, i suppose, and thanks for the comment

I agree with THX , very sweet and although it was a rambling of thoughts, it was presented very clearly. just a quick point, you used your instead of your’re a time or two.