these words are so true.

I know you told me to butt out the last time I commented on your work, but I like the intense feelings and morose outlook.
I don’t know why, but the first line reminded me of a Steve Martain quote… you just can’t sing anything sad when you’re playing the banjo

this really is a very well-written, almost poetic, piece.
what i would say to do is mention something about music at the end, too, because the beginning was very strong with it and then you almost trail off at the end. but that’s strictly my opinion, this is a good piece even without my suggestion, anyway.
=]

Krulltar, im sorry. I was in an awful fowl mood that day.

No prob. I was telling you how to write.

No prob. I was telling you how to write. I would have reacted the same way :)