Comments on engoy life the way it is cuse it trys so hard by <3 2 write

<3 2 write

great story
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:33.
Lone Writer

Dude you REALLY need to work on your grammer! This is very difficult to read!
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:33.
<3 2 write

shut up
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:34.
<3 2 write

shut up
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:34.
<3 2 write

shut up
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:34.
Insert Pen Name Here

jeez, rude much?

I’m sorry, but i’m on Lone Writer’s side here.

1: Is this a fictional story? If so, LW’s right and the grammar needs to be cleaned up. People won’t read it otherwise.
2: If this is not a fictional story but rather a personal testimonial, I’m sorry and I don’t want to be rude here but maybe it would be better suited for a different site, like livejournal or something.

also, I do think it has great potential as a story, you express things very well. :)
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:34.
ficletsforeverx3

Kris these people are just trying to help you maybe if u take some of there advise to can be in the popular secetion (no affese) as long as you tryyour best your goal will come true:]
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:34.
Writer4Life00nj

I agree with everyone! Us writers are just trying to help you! This story has a wonderful meaning and I think it touches us all, but, if you worked on the spelling, we would like it even more! If someone says something that you don’t like, try talking to them nicely, or send them a note telling them how you feel. Who knows!?! Maybe he could be a nice person!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:34.

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