oh, very good! I love it. it made me sad. :(

Painful and moving, with a lot of questions unanswered. Still not sure I followed the action, with him closing the door and her up against it but the house is empty and stuff and junk and just adding more cause the number of times I use and is funny and wrong and awkward and, at this point, thoroughly absurd.

ok I liked it. But I didn’t really get it. I mean. . .what do they need? Very good content, but left a lot of unanswered questions for me.

good story but i am not sure if it is prose or prose poetry?