wow that was off the lead rope, i really wasnt expecting you to fly….damn that rocked i give 7 and 789/1276th stars good freakin job

very creative! Great job capturing the fear and nervousness of the protagonist!

wow that was off the lead rope, i really wasnt expecting you to fly….damn that rocked i give 7 and 789/1276th stars good freakin job

Really cool idea. I like how you portrayed him so desperate that he would go through with this.

I really think this is my favorite thing that you’ve written. I can appreciate your dream a lot because flying is definitly on my list of things I’d love to experience.

Well done, my friend.