Now that’s my kind of threat! But sense I have a phobia of losing my teeth, I’ll still clear of Gina anyway.

I like this, not just because you wrote it from the opposite POV , but also because of the role reversal you introduced, making Gina the more aggressive character, and your male protag the more submissive homebody. Even before I suggested doing this to everyone else!

I agree with BAromero.

Very inventive, and I loved the line about the tooth fairy!

So many good, funny lines in this. The dialogue was snappy and well-paced.