well, you didn’t talk. lol!

Nice… “Just because I can’t look at her doesn’t mean I can’t smell her!” Just great X)

The last line gave me a nice look at his desperation in a funny way. The rest of it was well-written, I just think it’s really hard to escape the settled clichés of a romance story. But hey, I haven’t written an entry yet, so I probably shouldn’t be talking anyway. =)