Nice and sweet. But I don’t understand why you are typing in this style. If it was conversation I could see why, but it isn’t.
Nice story tho.

wow, i loved this. I understand this fully and hpe to see more. I can feel the sadness she feels as her almost lover flies away. Keep writing!!

wow, i loved this. I understand this fully and hpe to see more. I can feel the sadness she feels as her almost lover flies away. Keep writing!!

so sad, I hope she finds someone for her!

aww poor baby =’/

A broken heart…what a sad ficlet, but well written. I’m off to the sequel!