This was inspired by the Fall Out Boy song, “Our Lawyer Made Us Change The Name Of This Song So We Wouldn’t Get Sued,” which I stole the first two sentences from. Just fyi.

awe this is really cute! and I recgonized the song, neat idea! =)

That is really sweet. And to be inspired by Fall Out Boy makes it even better.

Very nice. The only jarring part (for me) is the sentence; The drive passes blindly.
Going from one point to another is understood by the readers. So for me this sentence was unecessary.

So cute :] I like this series so far.