Great dialogue… nothing like being a rock-star with your own personal police force ;)

So they already know who the employer is??
I don’t think the assassin would give it away that easy…
(I’m in a critical mood)
Also, what kind of band is this, normally the bandmembers wouldn’t be so civilized in the band you are trying to show… Just sayin.

things are pretty cooperative here.. so far. I’m reading on!