This is a piece of truly dodgy poetry I wrote a lifetime ago. It’s actually a little embarrassing to read it again after all this time (Seriously, can you rhyme love with beloved?). Apparently I was emo before they had a name for it.

lol. obviously you were. But I love it! Good work!

Faults aside, your talent shines through in this as in most things you write.

I really love the images you paint here. Rhyming is overrated, so don’t fret.

You get props for referencing Odin as Wotan. But yes, emo is the word… yet shy away from blushing, it’s still very well written.

A little too graphic for me, not to mention that it reeks of desperation. (I hate it in my poems, I’ll hate it in yours.)

i like this one! it is very emo but i like emo!!