At some point in time, all writers go through a block like this. One thing doesn’t seem too good, the other seems even worse than what you previously wrote…I think you captured the moment in a lovely manner. Thanks for entering! : )

Thanks to you for the good challenge

Definitely can relate to the writer’s block. Did you mean to go for such an odd phrasing for her question? It mostly works, but makes it sound like English is her second language.

Guess I just wanted to make her seem more sleep-deprived and tired than usual