Ok I am confused about the number of people and the relationship between them, is the investigator a male or female, who lost a husband, getting clues from a female and yet looking for a relationship with said female? Too many his, her, he she, flip-flops. I love the twist with the book and mom yelling for dinner, though!

Interesting. It sounds like my first attempt at writing, and just about as bad. Mistress Elsha is correct. this ficlet need a lot of work.

I’ll take notes and try harder in future, thanks for stopping by. “He”, he’s just a random kid, that kind of kids that gets an hold of his first serious book, and keeps reading it lots of time. So, it’s all a bad case of bovarism. Maybe I’ll rewrite some parts in future to made it clearer