Yeah, I’m two days late. Oh well.

awe, this is cute! lol. wonder who the lucky guy is ;)

Yeah me, too. Sequel, anyone? ;p

anna how many times do i have to tell you i am married, but when you write like this about me i swoon….just needlin ya good story thanks for entering this has lots of entries loa members really come out for the challenges huh?

Lovely moment, especially the sense of familiarity that quick evaporates into shock and expectation.

lolz, Mighty-Joe. Fuzzy-face, AKA , my boyfriend might come knocking at your door if you keep this up, buster. jk
And yes, it was a great challenge. Thanks for pointing it out to me, buddy.

kewl and tell your boyfriend i am just stupid lol

hey we brought you back to life in the loa series too

Hey ana, this is great! I love the descriptive setting at the very beginning and the humorous nod to the “dream gods” who are so cruel! But you toped it all with “his face was no longer fuzzy” ! :)

Yeah this is really good! The calmness of the moment is so evident, you really feel there when you read it. Nice.

You have a sequel, and the dream gods aren’t getting any nicer.

I love the detail of the ‘fuzzy’ face suddenly becoming clearer. This feels like either a fairy tale or a disaster waiting to happen.

Hooray for Fuzzy!

Lovely scene, my dreams always suffer from interruptus too,usually a bit further on in the story and VERY frustrating. You conveyed perfectly the ambiguity of form but the density of emotion that is the familiar texture of dreaming…did that just come out of me -crap-It was AWESOME -totally kewl and other appropriately goofy commentary…